I don’t seriously expect anyone to read this and marvel at the characters in Softening. This post is a list all the characters so I can link back to them from other, more readable, posts. Think of it as reference.

There are a few general points to make before introducing the cast.

  • There are 24 characters in Softening, which is at the upper limit perhaps. Some barely feature, such as Rob’s mum, but all have a significant effect on the story.
  • I’d tried to give each character a distinctive name – ideally each starting with a different letter of the alphabet. That’s technically possible but I don’t fancy wedging in Xavier so I haven’t stuck with that entirely, or at all really.
  • The characters are described with small details that I repeat – the part is the whole. Interestingly some minor characters have no physical description applied to them at all. I’m not sure if that is good. Probably not.
  • Some characters are not named in the novel – Perry’s dad and Rob’s mum. That’s deliberate in some cases and just omitted in others. I give them names in this cast list though. It seems cruel not to.
  • I’ve half a plan to write a series of linked books with these characters and others passing in and out of them. A pipe dream maybe, but it’s good to dream.
  • I love all the characters, irrespective of their flaws or perhaps because of them. It’s why I wrote the novel, to spend time with them all.

Romantic Leads

Northern Perry

Perry is the main point of view character for the story. She works as the finance director of a tech company. From northern England and loves the city of her birth. 

Character

Impatient and sharp, and has simmering anger issues. Affluent, high competent but lonely.

Appearance

Well toned to the point of being too thin. Sharp featured but elegant and contained. Tall and self-assured. Mid 30s.

Australian Rob

The object of Perry’s affection (eventually!). Rob also has POV sections, but a lot less than Perry – it is Perry’s story. Rob is a maths teacher in a generic city school. He does not take job seriously and this attitude bleeds through to other areas in his life. He is originally from Toowoomba, Queensland.

Character

Self-depreciating, clumsy, talks too much and doesn’t appear to listen sometimes. Probably has low level ADHD but this is never alluded to in the story. He has a good heart. 

Appearance

Shorter but not excessively so. Bright eyes that seem to twinkle on demand. Slightly overlong brown curly hair. Mid 30s but often acts like he is in his 20s.

POV Characters

Intense Clayton

Clayton is one of the two meditation teachers of the ‘Introduction to Meditation class.

Character

Very intense to the point where people are unsettled by his presence. Very direct with an atom splitting stare.

Appearance

Wiry man of indeterminate age – could be early 30s but later turns out to be in late 50s. Fond of tight fitting T-shirts.

Lovely Lovely Vanessa

Vanessa is the second meditation teacher.

Character

Clearly a lovely woman who can’t help but see the best in people. Is sometimes oblivious to events and has a high tolerance for embarrassing situations which appear not to phase her in the slightest.

Appearance

Long grey haired, willowy lady, probably in late 50s or early 60s. Wears beads and charms, and is always sporting a voluminous, ethnic style cardigan, which she envelopes other characters in during moments of crisis.

Stressed Dolores

Busy parent with four children. Her name means suffering.

Character

Constantly tired. Frequently in background searching for coffee which is invariably not there, empty or a chicory substitute.

Sullen Sophie

Dolores’s difficult eldest daughter. Even her grandmother won’t be alone with her. 

Character

Sucking negative presence but bonds with Perry.

Appearance

Dark clothes, dark looks.

Rest of Meditation Class

Community Warden Esteban

Odd, awkward middle aged man who is a self-appointed community warden in the run down inner city suburb where he lives. 

Character

Quiet with unspecified neurodiverse tendencies, probably some form of ASD. Surprisingly diligent.

Appearance

Habitual wearer of a fluorescent workers jacket, even when indoors.

Ryan and Kyle

Borderline criminal youths who constantly hang around outside the meditation class. 

Character

Abusive and threatening, but can be friendly and helpful. Rough diamonds – very rough.

Appearance

Ryan is tiny and looks like a child, whereas Kyle is huge and moose like. They are both the same age, Kyle having grown into his adult body, something which is still a long way off for Ryan.

Doggy John and Doggy Julie

Older middle aged couple who are obsessed with their toy poodle. Frequently slip into talking to each other as if they are the dog and will refer to each other as Mummy and Daddy. 

Character

Devoted to each other and rarely separated. In the story they are effectively one character in two bodies.

Appearance

Dress in broadly similar, comfortable clothes. 

Izzy

Very keen on auras and chakras. Izzy is a cipher for a particular kind of person that invariably turns up to meditation classes. Izzy deliberately rhymes with dizzy.

Appearance

Beads and charms, just like a younger Vanessa.

Character

Models herself on what she imagines a spiritual person to be. This is a cover for a weak sense of self. 

Dorothy and Brenda

Older ladies at the meditation class. 

Character

Dorthy and Brenda love a particular long running soap opera. They claim they never meditate and don’t know anyone who does. Basically delusional.

Rob and Perry’s Family

Anna

Perry’s mother. Doesn’t listen to Perry but very attentive to male opinions.

Harry

Perry’s father. A certain and authoritarian presence in Perry and Ann’s life. His influence has persisted long after his death, years previously. Unnamed in story. 

Tom

Rob’s father. An Aussie battler. Unnamed in story.

Grace

Rob’s Mother. Maternal and tough as old boots. Unnamed in the story.

Perry’s workplace

Mitchell

CEO at Perry’s company. Reasonable and saintly.

Lance

CIO at Perry’s company. Sharp and ultimately treacherous 

Sandrine Farrera

Executive Career Coach. Highly competent but unlikeable. Very similar to Perry and consequently Perry loathes her.

Others

Officer William McCallum

Clayton’s husband.

Mike

Grizzled mechanic working in a rough part of the city. Favoured by Rob, as he is cheap and friendly. Deliberately a reference to Mike and the Mechanics – sorry.

Frank

Concierge at Perry’s apartment and amateur poet. The archetypical neutral person – someone who Perry sees on a daily basis but doesn’t notice. 

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